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Protobeing
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In Krakauer’s book, Into the Wild, his writing approach is biased most time, and he discreetly puts himself in the story, such as using ‘I’ in his writing. This is rare in most historical fiction, especially since Krakauer is a journalist and formats the book as such. However, for chapter 14 of his novel, he doesn’t talk about Chris McCandless or his journey, but instead talks about himself and his journey to Alaska, taking inserting himself in a story to a whole new level. I believe that it is not ethical for an author to insert himself in a story, especially this far into the novel. I believe this is because it drives attention away from the main point and characters of a story to instead show the author doing something that might not be fully related to the main character and its plot. Although having an author insert themselves into a story can be seen as unethical, there can be exceptions to this belief. An example of this is if an author is writing about a true crime case and is inserting themselves at the crime scene to find clues or put things together. This can be seen as ethical because by inserting themselves, they help the story progress and move forward.

Although Krakauer's interruption into the story slows down the main story of McCandless, his interruption can also be seen as helpful. Why this can be seen as helpful is that it shows why Krakauer decided to write an article and novel about Chris McCandless, because he relates to him. Krakauer discusses how the two were similar, like, “As a youth, I am told, I was willful, self-absorbed, intermittently reckless, moody. I disappointed my father in the usual ways.” (pg 134). This helps show that Krakauer empathizes with him and that he can see himself in McCandless, and why he would want to run away, making his bias understandable. Krakauer understands McCandless’s need to run away, because when Krakauer did it, he describes how he, “[t]hen I climbed into my car and departed for Alaska. I was surprised, as always, by how easy the act of leaving was, and how good it felt. The world was suddenly rich with possibility.” (pg.136) Showing that he relates and can understand the urge to go see the world and how freeing it can be. This interruption offered us something that we wouldn’t have had in the novel, the reason Krakauer was invested in writing this story. He was invested in this story even when he was called crazy for defending McCandless; he didn’t back down because he knew the need to escape it all and understood MMcCandless'viewpoint. It helps the viewers view McCandless’s actions a little more fairly because while we might not know the real reason he left, by getting a story that's similar to both the narrator and adventure, it could change viewers' interpretations of who they thought McCandless was. I feel like if I were the author, this addition is necessary because it would explain why I’m devoted to this story and its significance to m,e because I see myself in McCandless. 

I found this element surprising because the whole story thus far has been about McCandless and his journey to Alaska and his death. So having the viewpoint switched to the author was intriguing and interesting. I felt that this did slow down the momentum of the McCandless story because we are drifting away from the main point of this story by instead focusing our attention on something relevant, but not at the same time. I dont think I would insert myself into a story if I had a relevant one to share because the main story wouldn’t be about me, so why would I take people's attention away from the main point of my story that I'm discussing to something that isn’t connected to my story.


   
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Protobeing
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I agree with your opinion on Kraukauer inserting himself in the story being unethical. I appreciate the analogy you used of a true crime documentary and how you could insert yourself to say what clues you would've seen and so on. I think that comparison helps tie together what Kraukaer is doing, but how he's doing it in a very extreme way. I also like the example you used because it shows how authors inserting themselves into their books isn't always unethical, this is just a certain case where it is. It provides a better foundation for your opinion by not just simply saying, 'you think it's unethical he put this chapter in the book.' 

 Adding an example like this is something I think should be done more often, as a way to get your point across in a strong way, but by using ethics, not just morals. I will definitely think about this more in my pieces to see if I can incorporate an example to help the reader understand the message I'm trying to get across. Do you think if he made the chapter shorter or connected it with McCandless's story better you would still think it's unethical? 


   
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Protobeing
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I really like how you explained both the good and bad sides of Krakauer putting himself into the story. I agree that it feels weird for him to suddenly start talking about his own trip after focusing on Chris McCandless for so long. It kind of pulls the reader out of the main story, and I get why you said it might take attention away from Chris. It also doesn’t feel very typical for a journalist to do that, so it stood out to me too.

Still, I can see why Krakauer did it. The quotes you used really show how much he related to Chris and how he understood what it felt like to want to get away from everything. I think that’s what made him want to tell Chris’s story in the first place. Without that chapter, we might not realize how personal this story was for him.

I think you made some really strong points overall, especially about how it slows down the book even though it helps us understand Krakauer’s perspective. Do you think the story would’ve been more powerful if Krakauer had just hinted at his own experiences instead of telling a whole chapter about them?


   
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