Your citations need to reflect the author of the story you read---in this case Siobhan Fallon.

Add citations for your quotes.

Add citations for your quotes.

Your quotes need to be from the same story, meaning your citations have the same last name. These look like they're from two different stories. Attemp...

Add citations for your quotes.

Add an overall message about war.

Add an overall message for each poem as a reply to your post.

Add a reply clarifying what the overall messages of both these poems are.

Add three more citations for songs that you aren't doing write-ups for. You can put those in a reply to your post.

Add in a reply that givest he citations for your first two quotes. Then include a message or theme for each poem.

Add an overall message for "Redeployment"